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Post by kukilas on Nov 29, 2010 21:52:31 GMT 8
Awesome, Bella! Amazing that you added three chapters today!
I like how they keep playing mind games with each other. At least Kwon surprised her in the last chapter. I can't wait to see how he continues to try to convince her he's not gay.
I can really picture them bickering. Can't wait for the next update.
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Post by loisginn on Nov 29, 2010 21:52:31 GMT 8
wowww... i didn't know that you have been updating this fanfic.. fighting... this is getting interesting.. i love it.. kiikikiki... fighting... wanting more updates from you.. this is great great great..
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Post by mss89 on Nov 29, 2010 22:01:00 GMT 8
Oh I just left for a while and when i came back, u updated another chap Thank you
"tame a lioness", good job kwon ah LOL Cant wait for next battle ^^
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Post by persona3700u on Nov 29, 2010 22:14:03 GMT 8
Woah..3 chap in a day?? Awesome!!!update more...^_~
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Post by twilightelusion on Nov 30, 2010 1:37:33 GMT 8
bells2amI love the story development tho i still wanted to pick up a red pen and correct some of the wrong words used. Occupational hazard. Plus, now knowing your age and that you are going to sit for your 'O' levels next year makes me a little anxious. But in any case! I can see you putting thoughts into the story development. And definitely can't wait to see this battle between prey-predator and who's what in any given moment. Great set-up there! Oh yea, next time when you update a new chapter, just send me a tweet @iamfor2am, so I can RT and more pple can know
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Post by goof on Nov 30, 2010 5:11:12 GMT 8
oh yeah!!! GO JoKwon!! girls wont respect you if you dont fight back, if you keep backing off from their mind games...i love your story, i was laughing with the other 2AM members about the gay rumors, how Kwonnie had a special puppy eye attack for JYP haha cant even imagine, and for this chapter i love the turn of events...
if you are still looking for suggestions on how she starts seeing him different or falling in love with him...here's mine, i like ep.11 when they had to record for WFIL, Gain still wanted revenge for that day in 2AM's dorm... all the attacks from her family couldnt stop Kwon from impressing her, Jea, the PD,and the writer that day... when they were coming back from recording he wrapped his arms around hers and she let him
you update so fast.. thanks
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Post by Tizzy~~^^ on Nov 30, 2010 6:37:08 GMT 8
3 episodes in 1 day I like it ^^ oooo! that last scene reminded me of the WGM MV almost kiss! aaaaahhh!! I really like this fic please update soon ^^!
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Post by giukz on Nov 30, 2010 14:12:35 GMT 8
owh finally i got chance to read^__^ (thank goodness my boss not around at tis moment:P) thx for the update...hehehehe...
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Post by bells2am on Nov 30, 2010 18:31:42 GMT 8
Chapter 10 (Perhaps I shall start using simple English, my vocab ain't that great; and after twilightelusion's comment, suddenly, I feel like... I don't know. Well, it's what happened that's important.)
Kwon's phone vibrated on the bed, the words on the screen written "Lioness Son Ga In", but noody answered the phone; Kwon was showering. The audacity of that gay to not answer my calls. Ga In murmured to herself, oblivious to her BEG noona's stares.
Kwon returned to his room, wearing a singlet and drying his hair with his towel. "Hmm?" he heard the soft vibration of his iphone. "New message" it wrote. "Ya, gay, I warn you, you better not give me any trouble tomorrow." by Lioness Son Ga In.
Pfft. Kwon thought. He threw his phone back on the bed and walked away from it. Suddenly, as if he had his "Eureka" moment, he hastily picked up his phone and dialled Ga In's number. Huh, so now he's calling. Ga In thought, smirking now. She was going to give him a piece of her mind.
When the line went through, the first thing Ga In said was "turn on loudspeaker". And so Kwon did, not realising what she wanted to do. "Go and get all the other rest to sit with you." she continued calmly. And that innocent fellow did just what she said. "Mworago, hyung?" Jin Woon asked when Kwon entered the room, with Seul Ong, Chang Min and Jin Woon laughing about something. He pointed silently to the phone he was holding.
"Hmm? Yeoboseyo?" Seul Ong spoke into the phone. Ga In, on the other hand, was smiling now. She cleared her throat slightly, and then she started. "YA! ALL 4 OF YOU, LISTEN UP! YOU GUYS GIVE ME ANY NONSENSE AND YOU ARE ALL GOING TO BE DEAD, ESPECIALLY YOU, JO KWON! YOU ARE DEAD TOMORROW, FOR WHAT YOU DID TO ME THE LAST TIME!" she started yelling.
Kwon held the phone away from his ear, shocked by her screaming. He rolled his eyes slightly and whispered something in the phone, something even the 3 boys on his side couldn't hear. "Mworago, Jo Kwon? What are you saying?!" Ga In shouted now. She had no time for his nonsense. Kwon never increased his volume. "Ya, Jo Kwon! What is it!" she said now.
He repeated, now a little louder, but still not loud enough. "What?!" Ga In shrilled, now extremely impatient. Ga In then turned the phone to loudspeaker. "Unni, tell me what this rascal is saying. I can't hear him." she said, looking at her BEG unni, of them NarSha having the best hearing. "Ya, Jo Kwon, say it out loud. Don't play a fool." Ga In said now.
"Noona, sarangheyo!" Kwon said out loud, almost a yell, then he hung up. "Ya, chassik..." Ga In was ready to scold him but he was already off the line. She looked slowly at her unnis, who were looking at her face. Soon enough, they were all bursting into laughter.
"Ga In ah. I told you he's not gay. He likes you already!" JeA said in between laughs. "Ga In ah, your charisma is so irresistable, even someone like him likes you!" NarSha said now, her face turning red. Ga In stared coldly at MiRyo, as if warning her not to rub it in. She didn't listen. She was laughing with the rest and gave Ga In a thumbs-up. "Daebak." she said.
Ga In's face turned green. Not with envy of course. How dare he embarrass me before my unnis. she thought, anger coursing through her mind. At the other side, Kwon was spending his time rolling on Jin Woon's bed, laughing uncontrollably. "Hyung, neo..." Jin Woon said, his expression shocked. "Kwon ah, you... like Ga In?" Chang Min asked now, his face masked in disbelief.
Kwon stared at them. "Seriously?"How can you guys not believe in me, or my taste?" Kwon said and started another wave of laughter. Apparently the others didn't find it funny. He sighed, as if mocking their intelligence. "I was trying to humiliate that lioness in front of her unnis. How dare she, telling them that I'm gay. So I shall embarrass her too. I trust she has never received love from gays." Kwon tried to muffle his laughter.
All the 3 guys turned their backs towards him and continued with their conversation. "Childish." Jin Woon had said, loud enough for Kwon to hear. "Ya... neo..." Kwon pointed an accusing finger at them. "Dweseo." he said, marching back to his room, that impy smile still plastered on his face. "If there's anyone dead tomorrow, it's you." he mumbled to himself.
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Sorry about the poor chapter, my inspiration is dying. Sigh.
Thanks for all the comments once again.
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Post by bells2am on Nov 30, 2010 18:56:38 GMT 8
Chapter 11
[15 minutes before the camera rolls for WGM recording]
Kwon and Ga In arrived at the location: their container box house, getting their hair and make-up done properly. Ga In was staring at Kwon with the corner of her eye. It was more of a glare, really. Kwon, on the other hand, was relaxed, and he was humming a random song, as if he didn't realise the death glare upon him. PD Jung then came forward, calling the both of them together.
"Today you guys are going to paint your house." she said, turning her head slightly to the container box behind her, her expression full of guilt for letting them stay in a place like this. "Ga In decorates the interior and Kwon builds something." she explained. They both nodded their heads, but not looking at each other. "So if everything's fine, the camera's rolling in 10 minutes." she said. Two heads bobbing again.
"Hope you have fun." she said cheerfully, leaving to speak to cameraman. Oh hell I''m gonna have fun. This person is going to pay a thousand times worse for what he did. Ga In thought, unable to hide her smile. Stupid lioness. Don't know what she's smiling at. Kwon thought now.
(mind war) Ya, you gay. You there. (Ga In) What's up, lioness. (Kwon) You better watch out. Today we're gonna see some blood around. Humph. What are you now, a vampire? Nope, but you're going to die beneath my palms. Just wait and see. Anytime, lioness.
"Rolling in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1." PD Jung said loudly. They went into the container box, Ga In rummaging through the things Chang Min had given them as their 'wedding' gift. Sleeping bags. Kwon took one and wrapped it around himself, zipping it all the way up. He was jumping around, like a cocoon of some sort. Ga In looked at his silly look and chuckled. Eureka Moment for Ga In. She stuck out her foot and tripped Kwon, and before he knew it, he was falling. Face down on the floor. Ga In acted like she was tripped by him and landed hard on his back, making him groan in pain."
"Cut." PD Jung ordered, and Kwon's manager picked him up. "Chwesong hamnida." Ga In aplogised, giving her most sympathetic look possible. "Kwon, gwaenchana?" Kwon's manager asked in concern. He didn't reply, he simply nodded his head and straightened his back, his eyes narrowing while looking at Ga In. "We'll cut that. Let's do it again." PD Jung said, reversing away from the scene.
Ga In and Kwon then jumped around in their sleeping bags, sweating like crazy. Lie detector. Ga In made Kwon answer questions. "Do you have other relationships?" she asked, looking like a concerned wife. "No."the innocent boy replied, smug. Ga In pressed the 'on' button, and touched the side of the detector. It was a tactic she learnt, that if the side was touched, the 'lie' result would appear.
True enough, the machine burnt Kwon's palm and 'lie' was announced. Ga In tried to look upset, with the unknowing Kwon sitting innocently beside her, not knowing her ploy. It went on, her cheating, and Kwon being clueless. I was being honest for you, your past relationship... no, current relationship with SooHyun must be made known, in a subtle way. she grinned, the message in her eyes crystal clear.
Kwon knew it, at that instance. His eyes burnt with betrayal. So she let him off for the last question. "Do you love me?" she asked, a little embarrassed, even if it was a pretense. His immediate answer scared her. "I do." he replied. Truth. Does he really... no, of course not. Ga In thought, the ridiculous idea thrown away from her brain.
Why in the world would someone like him love me? And she thought she knew best.
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Post by athenarei on Nov 30, 2010 19:19:20 GMT 8
~Whoa, Bella is on fire again, two chapters !?!?!? Seriously, it's amazing on how you do that ... I can barely do a chapter in one week and you're not THAT inspired you said ... hehehe ~Now, Gain's getting confused I'm anticipating she'll be having a 'debate' within herself: 'Kwon is Gay' would be her mind's stand while 'Kwon isn't Gay' according to her heart ^_^ Excited!!!! 'til next chap Bella ... nicely done =)
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Post by chinaeyes711 on Nov 30, 2010 19:21:13 GMT 8
wow, 2 updates!!!! keep it up. we love reading your fanfic.
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Post by sparklezane on Nov 30, 2010 20:10:44 GMT 8
wow bella seriously! u r so good!so much updates hehee thanks ya~
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Post by persona3700u on Nov 30, 2010 21:11:16 GMT 8
Awww...dont be sad and down bout comment and lesson given by others Take it as process of learning...anyway u done great...keep it up!! And update more!!fighting!!
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Post by bells2am on Nov 30, 2010 21:21:20 GMT 8
Chapter 12 (I'm on the go yeah. Or on fire, as claimed, haha. Yes I am obsessed with ideas, as much as my inspiration is dying as my life gets more and more boring. ^^ hukhuk. More replies bwahaha.)
"Yeobo. What's all this paint for?" Kwon kicked the cans, looking at them with curious eyes. Ga In rolled her eyes. "Painting?!" she answered matter-of-factly, making Kwon feel like a fool. "Of course I know it's for painting, it's not like I'm dumb or something..." Kwon defended. "Cut!" PD Jung ordered again. "Arguing's not helping the ratings, especially you two being new couples at that." she said, her expression impatient.
"Chwesong hamnida." both of them apologised, eyeing each other carefully. "Action." she went again. So the both of them painted the house, horribly, if I must say, but Kwon seemed to like it. See, lioness, we're two different contrast colours that look terrible together. Don't trifle with me. Kwon thought.
Ga In then used aegyo on screen for Kwon to make a plant holder for her. Of course he didn't fall for it, how could he? He did it for the on-screen image. He sawed and cut and pasted the cardboard together. As he was holding the saw and the crew was resting for a while, he called out to her. "Noona!" he yelled. She turned to look at him.
He held up his saw, grinning at her, back facing the crew. He looked exactly like a brutal killer who murdered his victim with a saw, the murderous look on his face. "Chugeotda. (Dead)" he mouthed, then went back to cutting up the cardboard. Ga In narrowed her eyes and went back to putting the curtains. "Mong choong yi. (Stupid)" she mumbled.
"Yigeo mwoya? (What is this?)" Ga In asked before the camera, pointing at the funny-looking construction of Kwon's. "A plant holder." he said, giving her a 'isn't-it-obvious' look. She muffled her laughter, or at least tried to. Apparently the crew saw it. "You call this a plant-holder?" she asked, holding it by one side, looking at it skeptically. "It wouldn't even hold a pen." she said impolitely, not leaving Kwon with any pride.
"Cut." Again, PD Jung. "Ga In, what is wrong with you today? What is wrong with both of you? Stop picking up fights. Small jealousy fights are good, but insulting his abilities? Ga In, you should know better. Even if you think it's not good, you..." PD Jung rattled on, her hands on her hips. "Chwe song eh, unni. Cheongmal chwesong hamnida." Ga In apologised, bowing lowly. She wanted this person to pay, but not at the risk of being scolded. Of course not.
"Dweseo. Continue." PD Jung looked at them carefully, and returned back to the crew stand. Filming went along as usual, Ga In acting as if she liked Kwon's creation and was touched that he made the first thing in his life for her. Kwon didn't fall for it, he wasn't stupid to that extend.
[End of WGM recording]
"You guys... work well." PD Jung said simply, leaving them alone, apparently upset that filming was not successful today. Both of them sent the crew away. Kwon sighed. He took a glance at her; she was packing up to leave. "Do you not have anything to tell me?" he asked her.
Silence.
"Do you..." he continued. "Oebseo. (No)" she replied casually. She whirled around to look at him. "What do you think I have to say?" she asked. He walked closer to her. "An apology?" he asked, uncertain. She rolled her eyes. "Why do I have to apologise to you? What did I do wrong?!" she pushed.
"Nothing." he said simply, turning away from her, stuffing his things into his bag. She looked at his back; it wasn't the usual Jo Kwon to escape a way to prank on her and make fun of her. "Yah." she called out, her hand on his shoulder, turning him to face her. A face of disappointment. No tears this time.
"What?" he asked, his forehead creased. "Nothing." she answered, letting go. She could hear him sighing softly. "Noona, I'm leaving." he told her, not looking into her eyes. He's not so bad if he calls me noona. What lioness. Ga In thought. She looked at Kwon's back as he left.
In an instant, she had pinned Kwon's back on the wall of the house. What am I doing? What is she doing? "Jo Kwon." she breathed. "I'm sorry." she said, a sound almost inaudible. And before he knew it, she pulled him into an embrace.
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OMO. haha bet you didn't expect the hug. Sudden inspiration. *ding!*
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