ernie
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Post by ernie on Dec 7, 2010 14:04:38 GMT 8
hahaha... its really fun to have a reader like you.
If thats the case, I will update soon. And please do tell me if you got it right.
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Post by moira05 on Dec 7, 2010 14:54:30 GMT 8
Good Job! Great story! Update very soon!
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Post by gosh on Dec 7, 2010 16:16:09 GMT 8
finish reading this!! i love it!!! ^___^ and i think i know who is ga-in's ex....hhehe might be wrong too tho...kwonnah!! hurry and go find her!!!!
p.s : did something happened in bali?? when they spent the night tgt..lol sorry for my pervert mode..==' *too much reading ac's intimate ff*
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Post by chinaeyes711 on Dec 8, 2010 2:24:09 GMT 8
updates please!!! dying of so much curiousity!!!
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Post by kukilas on Dec 9, 2010 14:50:41 GMT 8
I just started reading this fic and I like how the story is developing. Nice how they started out together in Bali. Now, I wonder how Kwonnie will find her. Can't wait for the reunion. Hope that you can update soon. ^^
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ernie
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Post by ernie on Dec 10, 2010 2:04:00 GMT 8
I'm sorry for the late update. This chapter is short because I've been busy with work and once again, I'm sorry.
I guess for the next few chapters will be quite easy for you to make a guess who and what will happen. But even so, I will try my best to write a nice ff ^^
Chapter 5
- Few days later -
At a Al-fresco restaurant near their office, Kwon and Changmin were out having lunch together. Getting a table at the verandah, Kwon took a seat and were looking at the people walking by; cars passing by before his mind drifted away for countless numbers of time.
“Yah... still thinking about her?” Changmin said to him after placing an order for himself and Kwon.
He looked at Changmin without saying a word. Days and nights, he's been trying to find her at every corner of Seoul, but every search would turn out to be hopeless. Until to the point where his desperation to find her grow stronger as time goes by.
“I've asked a friend of mine for help. He's good in finding missing people. Don't worry, OK. Hopefully there will be good news soon.” Changmin gave him some encouragement.
Kwon just nod his head, agreeing to whatever Changmin have said before turning his head and looked at the pavement next to him. Suddenly, he sit up from his chair, knocking against the table and spilling some water on it. Changmin was surprised by his sudden movement.
“Yah.. what's wrong?”
“Hyung... her. It's her.” Kwon said excitedly while pointing at someone across the road.
“Who?” asked Changmin as he tried to see who is Kwon pointing to.
“Her... the one from Bali.”
Kwon just jump over the railing before Changmin could say anything more. He dashed across the road, making some cars pulling an emergency brakes and sudden swerves. But as fate had planned something else for him, he lost sight of her.
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- 2 weeks later -
Changmin came running into Kwon's office and barged in. Kwon was surprised to see his sudden entrance which he have never done before.
“Hyung. What's wrong?”
“Kwon-ah.......” Changmin tried to catch his breath before continuing.
Seeing him looking breathless, Kwon brought him to the couch and make him take a seat and rest first. After about 5 minutes of silence, Changmin looked at Kwon and smiled.
“Kwon-ah. There's a good news for you.”........... “Remember that friend of mine I told you about. He managed to find some girls who have the same descriptions and name that you gave to us.”
Kwon was surprised to hear the good news. He never expected that the day where they will meet again have finally come. His mind started to plan on what to say and what to do when he see her again.
“Let's go and find her.....” Changmin pulled Kwon out from the office after seeing him looking confused.
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Walking out from the apartment, he seems disappointed as he crushed that piece of paper in his hand. Looking tired and unable to hold on to his emotion anymore, he get into the car and leaned his head backward, as he tried to stop his tears from flowing down his cheeks.
Changmin, who have been waiting for him in the car, patted him on the shoulder as he looked at him. He took that piece of paper from Kwon's hand and opened it. There is still one address left.
“Kwon-ah, we still have that last hope. Maybe it could be her.” Changmin tried to give that last bit of encouragement.
“Hyung, what if she's not?” Kwon turned and looked at him with that sadful eyes.
“At least you have tried till the end. That's what you would always do. The Jo Kwon I know will persevere to the end no matter what. So.... Fighting!” Changmin showed his supportive side as Kwon's hyung.
Looking at his hyung who seems tired as he is, he decided to give himself another chance in finding that last hope. And once again, he start his quest to find her, with his finger crossed throughout the journey.
Waiting across the road of that last address, Kwon leaned against the car as he looked at the night sky above him. Looking at the blinking stars, he mumbled to himself.......
'GaIn, can this last hope of mine will be you? I missed you so much. Where are you?'
Just at that moment, he saw a girl walking up the street, heading to the apartment. He squint his eyes to get a better look at the girl who is walking under the orange light of the street lamps. With every steps that she took, his heart were thumping harder and faster.
Without him realizing it, he took one step at a time, bringing him closer to her while his eyes were still looking at her. But when he was about to take one more step to meet her up-close, he stopped and turned around.
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Post by CANDYYY on Dec 10, 2010 3:23:50 GMT 8
Congrats!! You earn yourself a new fan!!! :3 Haha, keep writing~
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unknowmj
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Post by unknowmj on Dec 10, 2010 3:42:51 GMT 8
omo!am i thinking something bad is gonna happened to kwonie...i'm guessing he got hit by a car or sth....luv ur ff!
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Post by moira05 on Dec 10, 2010 5:39:12 GMT 8
waa.. I hope nothing bad will happen to Knonnie! Great chapter! I'm also writing one of the FF here and I do understand how you feel because I'm also busy with work but I hope you can update your FF soon! Take Care!!
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Post by AdamCouple4eva on Dec 10, 2010 7:53:04 GMT 8
I dont think he'll be hit by car or something..my guess is he saw GaIn with other "man".. oh nooooo..please update soon..don't let my mind going crazy because of this ^^ FIGHTING!!
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Post by ahgirl on Dec 10, 2010 8:58:42 GMT 8
he turned back just to tell changmin its Gain??? haha cnt wait for the nxt chapter.....
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Post by kukilas on Dec 10, 2010 11:40:42 GMT 8
Thanks for the update. Its so exciting. I am wondering why he turned back. I hope she wasn't with another man.
Looking forward to your next update. :-)
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Post by felikelelep on Dec 10, 2010 13:21:42 GMT 8
wooaaaa. this story is super good!!! I hope you can update soon!!!
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Post by loisginn on Dec 10, 2010 13:33:54 GMT 8
wow.. my first time reading this and man am i impress.. kikikiki i want more and more updates from you but i feel like we are gonna have heart break soon... kikikikiki.... anticipating more updates from you..
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Post by xpandax on Dec 10, 2010 14:35:03 GMT 8
Nice chapter..finally he found her..but.. Omo..I think there's another man~...OMG..ottokhe? Poor Kwonnie...TT_TT
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