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Post by gosh on Dec 7, 2010 16:48:53 GMT 8
wahhh new ff with new ideas~~~ i like it so far!!! i wonder who is ga-in...she's an important person that's been living in america? who's following her??? lol thanks for the update!
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Post by kukilas on Dec 7, 2010 18:48:13 GMT 8
I like your story so far. I like the AU they are in, where GaIn has a lot of mystery behind her, and does not even know 2AM. And from your story, it looks like Kwonnie has some secrets too.
Looking forward to your updates.
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Post by sparklezane on Dec 7, 2010 18:56:18 GMT 8
hahaha...good turn! ga in saved kwonnie from fans and now getting rid of everyone~~~can't wait for the next one weee~~~~
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Post by mujigae26 on Dec 8, 2010 0:57:30 GMT 8
waah... thanks for the update^^ i'm loving this... a lot please update soon^^
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Post by chinaeyes711 on Dec 8, 2010 1:58:35 GMT 8
so curious what will happen next. hope to read the update soon.
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Post by Tizzy~~^^ on Dec 8, 2010 6:43:46 GMT 8
She helped him!!! Me likes ^^ Please hurry with the next one~~ I'll wait for it fighting!
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Post by moira05 on Dec 9, 2010 16:37:51 GMT 8
Another chapter for you guys to read. Hope you like it!
****************************************************** Chapter 3
Gain's eyes widen as Jokwon does not want to return at the hotel.
"Excuse me? Did I hear you correctly?" asked Gain with confusion. " I thought.." "You heard me right?" Jokwon said as he interrupted Gain. "Do you want me to drive or you'll drive?" "Okay! Okay!" Gain said, then raised her hands as a sign of surrender.
Gain put the car on drive and moved. There was silence between them after 20 minutes of driving around. As they pass by a theme park, Jokwon suddenly held Gain's hand. She got surprised but then again she felt something different.
"His hand feels so warm" Gain thought but she shook her head. "What are you thinking, Gain-ah!"
"Let's go here." said Jokwon and then he flashes a smile at Gain.
Again, Gain was shocked with the sudden change of his character. "He looks different when he smiles." Gain again thought. "Aish, remember Gain he's a jerk, a cold hearted jerk". Shaking away her thoughts, Gain did not protest when they saw The Universal Studios Singapore. They were able to find a parking spot, good thing there aren't many people.
"I've never been here alone before." Gain said as they walk to the ticket booth. "or with a stranger before." Jokwon looked at her with a stoic expression. Again as if he does not care. "Hmp, never mind." Gain mumbled and frowned.
After getting their tickets, Jokwon suddenly stopped by the entrance and held out his hand. Puzzled, Gain looked at his hand. "Is he asking me to hold his hand?" Gain thought. Slowly she lifted her hand and placed it on Jokwon's but then he suddenly looked a her in strange way.
"What are you doing?" Jokwon asked looking at her hand and then turned to her. "I thought you are asking for my hand," Gain said. Jokwon suddenly let go of Gain's hand and held it up again. "I'm asking for your sunglasses." Gain instantly gave it to him and then frowned again. "You could have asked." Gain mumbled. "What?" asked Jokwon. "Nothing." Gain replied sarcastically.
Jokwon continued to walk with Gain's sunglasses on him as a disguise. Then Gain had an idea. Since she has been there before and rode most of the rides, she is going to get revenge. So before Jokwon can protest, Gain pulled his hand and dragged him to where the big rollercoaster is located. Before Jokwon knows it, he is already sitted on the rollercoaster and the seats belts are already being locked.
Gain was enjoying every part of the ride and seeing the face of a cold hearted jerk being nausious. Still not contented, Gain dragged Jokwon from ride after ride after ride until he raised his hands to surrender.
"Okay, okay..no more please." Jokwon said as if he is going to throw up. "Are you okay?" Gain asked pretending to be concern. "You don't look so good." "Can we go somewhere else with less excitement?" Jokwon said still catching his breath.
Gain now realizes that Jokwon is really not okay. She also feels a little sorry for his state so she assisted him to sit down and decided to buy some food.
"Just sit there. I'll be back." Gain said and then run to the nearest snack booth.
Jokwon looked up as Gain runs to get some food. There are still questions running through his mind about Gain and their situation. Lost in his thoughts, Jokwon did not realize that Gain is already calling him.
"Yaah!" Gain shouted. "Aish! Don't shout!" Jokwon replied. "Here's some soda and hotdog", said Gain as she handed him the food. " I didn't realized you have not eaten anything since this we got here."
Jokwon accepted the food and ate quietly. "He could have said thank you." Gain thought as she ate her food. "Hmp, what will I expect from a cold and distant man".
Before the sun sets, the two decided to leave the park. Before opening the door, Jokwon suddenly stopped as if thinking of something then turned to Gain.
"Do you drink?" asked Jokwon. "Oh yeah, you do. I smelled you the other day" "Yaah, you don't have to remind me that!" Gain said as she remembered how Jokwon treated her that day. "Let's drink". Jokwon said with an expressionless look and then entered the car with out a second word.
Questions were running through Gain's head as she enters the car. She looked at the person on the passenger's side and could not help but think on why he suddenly want to still stay with her. They continued to drive until reach a couple of small drinking stalls by the beach. After parking their car, the two looked for a stall that a few customers. How the stall was pretty cozy, small pillows layed on the sand and small candles lit up on the small table.
After ordering a couple beers and barbeques, Gain took off her boots and slides her feet on the sand. As the sea wind touches her face, she closes her eyes and let out a sigh. Gain was so into the moment, she did not realize that Jokwon was staring at her.
"I didn't realize how pretty she is" Jokwon said to himself still looking at Gain. Jokwon brought his sight to her neck down to her hands. Jokwon's ears turned read and just when he realizes that he his blushing their drinks and food just arrived.
A few more minutes of silence has passed and Gain could not bare it any longer. She broke the silence..
"Are you not curious on why I saved you after how you treated me the other day?" Gain asked point blank. Surprise about the question, Jokwon did not know what to answer. "Okay, okay, disregard my question." Gain said with an annoyed tone. "You can keep silent as long as you like until your mouth will be permanently shut." Jokwon looked at her with amazement but eventually broke his silence, "For a small girl like you, you do have a big mouth." "Wow, finally he speaks!" Gain stood up to rejoice. " he speaks! he speaks!"
Jokwon was able to grab a hold of her hand and pulled her down to sit.
"Are you drank already?" Jokwon asked. "NO!" Gain replied. "Don't you know how frustrated I am on how I can make you talk?"
And there was silence again. Jokwon felt a little sorry for her. On his side, he just does not know where to start.
"Grrrr! I give up!" Shouted Gain as she opened another beer and drank. "Thank you." Jokwon said shyly and also opened another beer and took a zip.
Gain almost choked when she heard his words. She put down her half full beer and looked at him with a questioning look.
"Don't look at me like that." Jokwon said as he now stares at the beach. "I know I treated you badly the first and second time we met and I'm sorry."
Seeing Jokwon like this makes Gain's heart a little softer for him.
"Don't you know it's been a long time since I had a break?" Jokwon continued. "Since I was a trainee, I was told I was not good enough. That I'm not a good singer. So for 8 years, my only focus is to be a better singer. I said to my self then that I don't need any distractions. My only goal is to be where I am today."
Gain now knows why there was sadness in his eyes. To be famous as he is today he made a lot of sacrifices. This made Gain see Jokwon on a different perspective. He is human after all.
Realizing that his making the mood a little mellow dramatic, Jokwon turned to Gain..
"What about you? What's your story?" Jokwon asked. "Why are you in Singapore? You seem to know your way around."
"Again he must not know", Gain thought.
"Aah..aam..my aunt leaves here and I'm just visiting." she quickly answered. "amm..let's drink more!"
You can now feel that the atmosphere between the two became more lighter. They were able to exchange joke and laugh. As the night deepens, the two decided to walk down the beach. As they walk they began to notice that the number of couples around them. Gain blushed when one couple suddenly kissed. It made her walk a little more faster and Jokwon tried to follow her pace but suddenly got dizzy as the alcohol they drank kicks in. Jokwon fell face first. Gain was shocked and run to his side.
"Are you ok?" Gain asked with concern. But all she can hear was laugh. Jokwon turn to his back and kept on laughing. "Haha, what's wrong? Gain asked again. "I'm really enjoying this." he answered.
Gain offered her hand to Jokwon to help him up but as he tries to stand, Jokwon was not able to gain balance and suddenly pulled Gain over. They both got the shock of their lives because as they fall, as if in slow motion, Gain landed on top of Jokwon and there face suddenly were right in front of each other. As for their lips, they were sticked together. An accidental kiss.
Gain was about to pull her self out of the situation when Jokwon held her even tighter.
****************************************************** End of Chapter 3
Please feel free to post any comments and suggestions.
Thanks for reading!!
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Post by kukilas on Dec 9, 2010 16:58:45 GMT 8
Accidental kiss! What a nice ending!
I am glad Kwonnie decided to hold her tighter. I hope they start to open up to each other more.
I wonder about GaIn's history, though. Sounds like she has quite the story behind her. :-)
Looking forward to chapter 4.
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Post by ahgirl on Dec 9, 2010 17:27:53 GMT 8
ahha the kiss is AML where kwoniee got kiss by accident however, kwon is enjoying the kiss in here ....... ;D
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Post by chinaeyes711 on Dec 9, 2010 18:05:59 GMT 8
An accidental kiss!!! hope this accidental kiss will lead something more deeper and more intimate.
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Post by AdamCouple4eva on Dec 9, 2010 18:22:46 GMT 8
nice~hmm..from what I see and if I'm not wrong GaIn's and JoKwon's character in this FF are the opposite from the real one rite ^^ hahahhahaha..love it..the accidental kiss..it reminds me of AML keke~ well done *clap..clap can't wait for the next chap..FIGHTING!!
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Post by xpandax on Dec 9, 2010 21:01:13 GMT 8
Omoo.....~Accidental KISS....and they're really kissing....kyaaa~
what's next?what's next??....kyaaa~....going crazy...kekeke update soon~
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Post by moira05 on Dec 10, 2010 1:55:47 GMT 8
Thank you guys for the comments! I'm glad you all liked it. Haha.. can't tell what is next. Just have to wait a little more.. I'm working on it.
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Post by AdamCouple4eva on Dec 10, 2010 7:54:09 GMT 8
moira FIGHTING!! I'll wait patiently ^___^
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Post by moira05 on Dec 10, 2010 10:11:17 GMT 8
Here is another updated for you guys!
Hope you all like it! J
***Modified Version*** (My other post had different characters on it! Sorry about that!) -----------------------------------------
Chapter 4
“I can’t believe this is happening?” Gain thought as she feels the warm set of arms that has been wrapped around her grew tighter. It was like everything around then went on slow motion. There was a sweet slow music playing at the background and as she looks at the person below her, her heart beat even faster. When she realized that Jokwon is going to kiss her again, she just closes her eyes and….
“Yaah!!”, Jokwon shouted and even threw a peace of ice in front of her. “Don’t tell me you’re falling asleep already! I’ve been talking here but all the while you were sleeping?!”
Gain almost fell off her seat when she heard Jokwon’s voice. “Gain-ah! What’s wrong with you?” Gain thought. “Why were you day dreaming of him kissing you”. Gain did not realize that they were still sitting in the stall and as she glanced at Jokwon, she can see him glaring at her but at the same time already drunk. Through out her day dream Jokwon was able to consume all of the alcohol they ordered.
“Sorry, I was just thinking of something” Gain said but she can feel her face grew hot as she remembered what she was just day dreaming. “Come on let’s walk”, Jokwon said as he tries to get on his feet.
Gain’s eyes widen. “Oh no, not again!” she said to her self. “What if the kiss happens when decide to walk”.
Gain nervously stood up from her seat and picked up her boots but as she turned to Jokwon he was already too drunk to stand up and eventually lost his balance. Feeling guilty and sorry for him, Gain walked up to Jokwon and took his arm.
“Come on, let’s go back to the hotel.” Gain whispered.
With a heavy heart, Gain slowly walks Jokwon to her car and drove back to reality.
At the hotel, everyone is still on panic mode. Jokwon’s Manager and their own are all waiting for updates from local police of his where about. The hotel’s security are also on alert just incase Jokwon shows up. Up in 2AM’s room, Changmin, Jiwoon and Seulong are also worried that something might have happened to their leader.
“Hyung, I hope nothing happened to Jokwon-hyung” Jiwoon said as he paced back and forth in their room. “Stop that Jiwoon-ah!” Seulong shouted. “You are making me dizzy.”
Jiwoon stopped and sat beside them looking like a kid being scolded by his mother.
“What will happen to 2AM now? Seulong asked Changmin with a puzzled look.
“Guys, nothing will happen to Jokwon, Okay!” Changmin said in relaxed way but deep inside he is also worried to death about Jokwon.
Gain stopped the car before entering the hotel’s drive way and she can see all the security personnel guarding. She looked at Jokwon and she can see how peaceful he looks when he sleeps. Then she gently strokes his face…”Tomorrow, you might not remember me anymore or you might just ignore me when we run into each other” Gain whispered. “But that’s okay. I’ll always keep this memory close to my heart. I got to meet a star, Jokwon”. What Gain did not know is that Jokwon was just pretending to be asleep. He was able to hear every word Gain has whispered. That made his heart skip a beat and his admiration for her even grew a little more.
After hearing a big sigh from Gain, Jokwon felt the car move again. As the car slowly moves towards the front door of the hotel, Gain’s heart began to pound really hard as if it wanted out of her chest. Then the car stopped. Both of them were able to hear the people and security surrounding the car, so with cold hands, Gain opened her door and walked around the passenger door. A lot of things are going through her head now. “I hope no one will recognize me” Gain thought. “What am I doing? I can get in trouble because of this!” she continued in her head. Slowly she opened her passenger door.
When one of 2AM’s securities saw Jokwon lying in the car, he immediately ran to him knocking Gain of her feet. Luckily another security personnel was able to get a hold of her but then grabbed her and dragged her in the lobby. Jokwon on the other hand realized that he is now being escorted towards the elevator back to their room. While waiting, he turned around as if he is looking for someone but when he heard someone shouting. He quickly glances on where it was coming from to his surprise, a group of security is all around Gain as if they were interrogating her. It made Jokwon mad, so with out thinking twice he was able to push his security aside and run to Gain.
“Let her go!” Jokwon shouted.
Everyone got startled as this is the first time they heard Jokwon shout.
“Sir, we are just asking her a few questions.” A security said. “I said let her go!” Jokwon voice is now fiercer.
As Jokwon looked at Gain, she was just like a child who lost her parents. She was just looking down on the floor and in shock. He slowly walked up to her and grabs her hand. Surprised with the sudden gesture, Gain looked up and saw how angry Jokwon was but his eyes are full of concern.
“You don’t need to ask her questions.” Jokwon said as he looked at the security person with eyes staring like daggers. Then slowly looked at Gain and said, “She saved me.”
With that being said, Jokwon dragged Gain to the elevator.
---------------------------------------------------------- End of Chapter 4
It's kinda short but I put a little drama into it.
Please feel free to post any comments and suggestions.
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