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Post by kukilas on Dec 18, 2010 22:46:39 GMT 8
Bells, thanks for the newest chapter. Looks like you're inspired. :-)
I am glad he is turning to Gain for his problems. Now I am wondering about the lesbian in her past. Hahaha.
But, its good they're getting closer. Hopefully, SooHyun won't do anything bad to Kwonnie or GaIn.
hope you continue to be inspired. I look forward to your next update.
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Post by bells2am on Dec 22, 2010 21:26:16 GMT 8
Chapter 29 (I've been itching to do this chapter but never had the chance. Gah, well here it is. I am considering to do a Chinese ff or a one-shot. Guess it's because Chinese is like my... better subject. Yes it is. (: Well, here goes.)
Kwon almost scalded his tongue from his coffee and stared at her, wide-eyed. "Pwahaha." he laughed, smiling widely. "Ah, noona, you almost got me there." he said in between laughs, his voice not as confident as before. Ga In looked at him seriously. "I'm serious." she said with affirmation. Kwon looked at her, his expression definitely doubtful. Ga In sighed heavily, and opened her tired eyes. "You know, even my unnies don't know about this." Ga In whispered to him, putting her index finger on her lips. Kwon was shocked; but he nodded foolishly, not quite sure what she had asked him to do. Ga In looked upwards, as if reminiscing her past. "It was in college. There was this senior of mine, we were good friends. Really good friends. She was a very clever girl, topping her cohort all the time, and I was always envious of her good results and how she was so popular at the same time. She became my tutor, teaching me many things, ranging from homework to life principles, I learnt a lot from her. Suddenly one day, as we were studying at her place and I was about to walk away to get a book from her desk, she grabbed me by the wrist."
Kwon held his breath, like a little boy listening to a fairytale said by his mother. Ga In glanced at him with the corner of her eye, smiling to herself as he got himself tensed up at the story. "She pulled me back into my seat and got up from hers and stood before me. She made her confession. 'Ga In ssi, I've been trying to tell you for very long, and it has been in my heart for very long, and I must tell you today. I... am fond of you. I have no idea why, but I am. I must say, you are most attractive, and I lost myself. Will you...' I got freaked out immediately and grabbed my bag, dashing out of her place. Of course, that wasn't the end." Ga In said, as if telling someone else's story and not her own. Kwon on the other hand, was totally absorbed into the story, his eyes wide open, the cup of latte still in his hands, gone cold already. "She bothered me every other day, and I attempted to ignore her. Ignore her phone calls, ignore her comments or messages to me online. But meeting her was still inevitable; we were studying in the same school, you see. One afternoon, as she caught me walking on the corridor, she pulled me into a dark alley and pinned my back onto the wall. She said many weird things, and attempted to..."
Ga In paused, wincing at the memory. Kwon was still holding his breath; he knew what she had wanted to do. He pointed to his own lips, and Ga In nodded in agreement. She had wanted to kiss her. Kwon winced too. Ga In continued. "But I startled her by leaning closer to her, as if wanting to give her what she wished. And when she relaxed her grip on me, I ran for it. Away from her, away from the school, I was truly freaked out. It was like my personal hell, nightmares haunted me every night. That vivid scene, was like burnt into my mind. How she had came after me. Pulling me, pinning me, coming closer to me. I wish she would stop, I wanted to tell her how I felt about all this, and how I only liked men. But I was afraid she wouldn't understand. So I found my friend, my senior to be exact."
"He was a big, burly, muscular man and a single look at him in the eyes would scare the hell out of you. But he was a sensitive guy, really, and it surprised me that he understood my situation. So we came out with a show, an act to bluff her. I hooked my arms with that big burly senior and we walked openly in the corridors, allowing him to give me a peck on my forehead whenever she came near." Kwon cringed. She had let some other man kiss her on her forehead. Kwon shook that thought off, finally remembering to breathe. He found his voice and uttered, "then?", sounding a lot like a croak. Ga In closed her eyes, remembering the scene. "One day, she couldn't take it anymore. Pulling me into another private corner, she had threatened to harm all the people around me, even myself. She believed that if she herself could not own me, then no one else would. My big burly senior then appeared, like saving a damsel in distress, he threatened to hurt her, flexing his muscles. She ran away, but she never stopped harrassing me. Those mushy messages, calls and comments only increased."
"This went on all the way till I was about 17 or 18, when I had that first love again. The one. Salt room." Ga In spoke guiltily, as if she did something wrong. Kwon flinched. "She sort of gave up. Well, why wouldn't she, having a real boyfriend sort of showed her that I liked men." "Why wasn't she bluffed when you appeared with the big bulky senior, then?" Kwon asked, curious now. Ga In rolled her eyes. Pointing to her head, she said, "She's smart, Kwon. She understands all that, love, relationships. Guess she knew me well enough to know that I didn't like men like him. It was until the first love came. Everything was real; nothing could fake it, until she really believed it, I guess." Kwon looked at her intently. "So... about the Soo Hyun case, you're suggesting..." Kwon asked, probing for an answer. "Go get a girlfriend." Ga In answered, leaning back into her seat as she finished her long story.
Kwon peeked up at her from his long eyelashes. Sweeping his fringe to one side, refraining it from blocking his view, he smiled. "Ga In noona, will you be mine?" Kwon asked, full of sincerity.
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GA IN NOONA, WILL YOU BE MINE?! Omg, I'm so awesome. Sorry to athenarai, I can only update one todayyyyy. My mum is a nag. We shall see. Heehee. ^^ Okay, please reply~
And ideas on one shot or chinese ff! Encourage, or not? Love, Bells.
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Post by athenarei on Dec 22, 2010 21:43:36 GMT 8
^^Bwahaha~maybe u can tell your mom something like this: Mom, I need to be in the computer. My HOMEWORK is more on research stuff ... ^^Am I a bad influence now ~The start of claiming what's yours, huh ... Owning(?) each other in public, not bad idea to shoo away weird-obsessed-creepy suitors(?) ... SH is still a mysterious fellow, can't wait for further details about him ... My stress is now diminished, thanks for updating Bella =)
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Post by skymonkey on Dec 22, 2010 23:15:31 GMT 8
OMG this fic is simply daebak !!!! I love it so much. And yes you are totally awsome!! My most favourite sentence is :"Noona, will U be mine?" OMG I'm gonna die *fly away* Kwon ahh~~ I love you *sob* when will U spit it out with Ga In noona ?? I'm dying seeing that scene in WGM (
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Post by mss89 on Dec 22, 2010 23:59:12 GMT 8
"Ga In noona, will you be mine?" Quote of the week How Gain could refuse him when she was the person told him that solution I'm a bit worried abt SH. He's not that easy . But two is better than one rite ? Gain+Kwon > SH of course
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Post by kukilas on Dec 23, 2010 0:04:18 GMT 8
Bells, I love the line, GaIn Noona, will you be mine? Its almost like his speech during the wedding in Bali. I got shivers.
Can't wait for the next update. ^^
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Post by Tizzy~~^^ on Dec 23, 2010 1:53:30 GMT 8
Ohh goood "Ga In noona, will you be mine?" Ohh Myyy!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next update! gooshhhhh keke sorry I get too excited and just like Ga In said, "Everything was real; nothing could fake it" ohhh they can't fake it ^^ please update soon ;D
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Post by mujigae26 on Dec 23, 2010 11:43:27 GMT 8
miss writer, again...you are awesome..!!!^^ i agree to athenarei..say that you homework is more on research..hahaha jk jk ^^ "Ga In noona, will you be mine?" omo omo omo...i hope she will say yes thanks for the update...please update when you have a chance..kekeke and good luck to you and your nagging mom
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Post by AdamCouple4eva on Dec 23, 2010 12:33:40 GMT 8
bellaaaaaa~ omo~ "Ga In noona, will you be mine?" huaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..I really wanna hear that for real kekeke~ love it..looooove it.. wonder how Gain's reaction to his question or should I call it his proposal don't wanna think bout SH now..wanna savor this moment ^________^ buahahaha..I think u should go with athenarei's suggestion then lol~ hope u can escape from ur mom soooon
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Post by goof on Dec 23, 2010 13:10:36 GMT 8
i bet Gain's heart will be thumping after hearing Kwon say that.. if Gain accepts will SH believe or not, and will he stop going after Kwon... will this relationship be for the benefit of SH alone or the members are going to know about... cant wait
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Post by bells2am on Dec 25, 2010 0:06:55 GMT 8
Chapter 30 (Woots thirty, but they're still progressing slowly. Hope you all are anticipating this. And woah, look at all those new fanfics. I am overwhelmed. Sadly, can't read them all. Time time time.)
Ga In's jaw went taut, her heart beating furiously against her chest. Narrowing her eyes, she looked at Kwon skeptically. "Very funny." she said, her tone slightly serious. Kwon put his hand on hers suddenly, looking intensely into her eyes. "I'm serious, noona. Will you?" he asked, his tone full of sincerity. Ga In's heart palpitated. thump thump thump thump. Her heartbeat deafened her. She couldn't hear herself anymore; she couldn't see straight anymore. Kwon still had that smile plastered on his face, his eyes still intense, as if anticipating something. Ga In's heart skipped a beat when Kwon gave her another assuring smile and tried her best to breath properly. She fidgeted around uncomfortably, not entirely sure if she should agree to him or not... Wait. Did he just confess?
Did I just confess? The same thought whirled in Kwon's mind, then silently cursing himself for not being able to control his emotions; and his big mouth. Perhaps I had misunderstood, was it simply a show he wanted? Ga In thought. Of course it is. she assured herself, slowly slipping her hand away from beneath his. She looked at him sternly. "You are expecting me to agree to put on a show with you to trick Soo Hyun... Are you?" Ga In asked, her tone masked with uncertainty. The bewildered Kwon was slightly taken aback by her statement, but to ease the situation, he nodded his head just slightly. A tinge of disappointment surfaced in Ga In's mind, her face betraying her of this information. Kwon had seen it on her face. How her face had fell when he had nodded uncertainly. Kwon wanted so badly to take the nod back, but decided that this was better anyway.
Kwon's smile had faded off his face, but it seemed to appear on Ga In's. She took in a deep breathe and smiled widely, still not covering all of her disappointment. "You scared me for a moment there." she answered, her palm on her chest, assuring herself that the worst was over. "I thought I just told you that it had to be real. Looking realistic." she replied, leaning back into her seat, relaxing her tense position. Kwon leaned back too. "But aren't you my 'wife'?" Kwon asked, making finger movements to show the open and close inverted commas. "Wouldn't Soo Hyun believe that we became together after recording this show for so long? This show is our cover. After all, every single soul on the streets seem to treat us as a couple." Kwon shrugged. Ga In considered his logic. I guess he's right. She could find no excuse to argue about. "Why should I help you?" Ga In asked, her chic expression starting to reappear, trying her best to hide her smile. Kwon took about 15 seconds to react to this one, his brain mechanisms working their best to find a suitable reason.
"Torture-free recording from now on?" Kwon suggested, his shoulders going upwards, raising his eyebrows. Ga In chuckled. "Modesty is a virtue, young one." she teased, smiling at him. Kwon managed to force out a slight smile. Ga In couldn't help but chuckle again at his helpless expression. She stretched out her arm and it went across the table, her hand on Kwon shoulder. She tapped it firmly, as if giving him assurance. "Considered that we're on rather good terms now, and doing this might earn me some good karma and not harming anyone (except breaking Soo Hyun's heart), I'll go with it." Ga In agreed readily, smiling at Kwon. Kwon broke into a breathtaking smile, one of comfort. Bringing his own arm up to his shoulder, he put his hand on hers and looked at her. "Komawo, noona." he thanked her, smiling once again. "On one condition." Ga In said suddenly, retracting her hand on his shoulder and putting her index finger out to show him. Kwon looked at her suspiciously and nodded his head in uncertainty.
"Listen to me. All the time. I won't harm you; don't worry, but always do what I say, because most of the time it does add a little to the hatred and what I say is always - or most of the time - right." Ga In said with conviction. Kwon narrowed his eyes. "No bargaining and excuses. No reasoning. Nothing. Just do whatever I say." Ga In reinforced her point, her expression now stern. Kwon showed her a goofy face, acting as if he were freaked out by her comment. "Ooh, I'm so scared." Kwon joked, smiling as he said. Ga In tilted only one side of her lips. "You should be." she said. And somehow, Kwon felt that he should be.
"Well, you wanna sit here till midnight?" Ga In asked, rubbing her arms, shivering from the cold, even with hot - or used to be hot - coffee and the heaters on in the entire cafe. She started to stand up. Kwon got her signal and stood up too, the duo leaving the cafe with the weird do-up. Kwon pushed the black rimmed spectacles up the bridge of his nose. "Thank god I'm not short-sighted. Spectacles are such a hassle." he mumbled to himself, his teeth chattering like crazy the moment the left the cafe. So did Ga In's. The both of them loitered on the bare streets, shivering in the cold. Not many people were walking as slowly as they were - it was too cold to have a walk. Kwon looked as the people brushed against him, walking hurriedly along the path, the cold air breathing out.
Kwon took another glance at Ga In, who wasn't wearing exactly very very thick wool clothing, but sure, it looked fashionable and glamorous. The price for vanity. Kwon muttered to himself. He suddenly took off his scarf twined around his neck and walked closer to her. Putting the scarf on her, he wound it tightly around her neck. "You'll need this more than me. You're turning green already." he said, poking her cheek. She narrowed her eyes and pushed his finger away. "And you're going to turn blue-black because I'm gonna beat you into a pulp!" Ga In said and started running after Kwon. "Noona! I'm a 100m champion sprinter! You can't catch me!" Kwon answered, running away from her. And on the streets, two silly persons with weird get-ups were chasing each other on the streets, too different from the rest rushing home to their cosy fireplaces. Somehow, in the cold wintry night, these two got the warmth they needed.
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'tis the season to get snowy~ Hope you liked this one; Ga In agrees, but the plan's still not in place yet. Merry Christmas everyone~ And you evil unnies, trust you guys to suggest tricking my mum like that, especially you, athenarei. Cha, glad to ease your stress momentarily though.
Love, bells. (They're having fireworks now I think.)
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Post by felikelelep on Dec 25, 2010 0:33:30 GMT 8
wow, an update!!! thank you bells!!!
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Post by AdamCouple4eva on Dec 25, 2010 1:16:47 GMT 8
thank you so much for the warmth update bells I like the slow progress..mean that they can build the strong basic for their future relationship right ^_________^ hahahaha..well..I should say that being the evil one more easy than being an angel bells kekekekeke~
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Post by persona3700u on Dec 25, 2010 1:24:43 GMT 8
Thanks for updating...^_^
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Post by oqyoiko on Dec 25, 2010 2:12:36 GMT 8
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